With a rough start to the Eastview Volleyball season they found some of their strengths as a team. With everyone working together they have been very successful at changing the wrongs to rights.
"One of our strengths this year is our ability to adapt. With injuries with some of our starting players it has forced us to get out of our comfort zone and play positions that we wouldn't typically play and play them competitively." –EGAN
On the other hand, though they have many strengths as a team they also have weaknesses to their team.
“Keep working on plays and defense and we're set.” –ASHLEY
“I think belief in yourselves and the confidence you can compete with anyone. I love to watch individuals grow and gain confidence in their abilities.” –ROB
When all those things come together there are many people that like to come cheer on the Eastview Lightning Volleyball team, such as the parents.
“I feel the season is going well. I don't judge success by only wins and losses, although that is important. Another big part of success is how the players and the team is developing and growing. In thinking back over the season so far all players have shown tremendous improvement and the team is coming together more as a "team" and the play is showing that.” -ROB
With all this coming together the team is very successful. The team is on a role to a very fun and also successful season and they have a long ways ahead of them!
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ReplyDeleteWith a rough start to the Eastview Volleyball season*,* *the girls have finally* found some of their strengths as a team. With everyone working together*,* they have been very successful at changing the wrongs to rights.
"One of our strengths this year is our ability to adapt. With injuries with some of our starting players it has forced us to get out of our comfort zone and play positions that we wouldn't typically play and play them competitively." –EGAN
On the other hand, though they have many strengths as a team they also have weaknesses to their team.
(* Idea for better wording of this paragraph -- Although they have many strengths as a team, they also have weaknesses. Like all other volleyball teams, they are not perfect and there are things to improve on.
“Keep working on plays and defense and we're set.” –ASHLEY
When all those things come together there are many people that like to come cheer on the Eastview Lightning Volleyball team, such as the parents. (*Move this paragraph above the quote*)
(*Question isn't restated in the answer, so it's kind of confusing. Maybe just take out the first sentence of the quote and begin it at "I love to watch..."*)
“I think belief in yourselves and the confidence you can compete with anyone. I love to watch individuals grow and gain confidence in their abilities.” –ROB
*Combine the quote above with the quote below. Edit out some of the sentences so it's not as long*
“I feel the season is going well. I don't judge success by only wins and losses, although that is important. Another big part of success is how the players and the team is developing and growing. In thinking back over the season so far all players have shown tremendous improvement and the team is coming together more as a "team" and the play is showing that.” -ROB
With all *of the important factors* coming together, the team is very successful. The *Eastview Volleyball team is on a role*roll* *and expects to finish off the season with a lot of fun memories.* * They've got a lot of time to make this season successful!* to a very fun and also successful season and they have a long ways ahead of them!
-With a rough start to the Eastview Volleyball season they found some of their strengths as a team. With everyone working together they have been very successful at changing the wrongs to rights-----Play with the wording here, It sounds a little goofy and is missing something.
ReplyDelete-On the other hand, though they have many strengths as a team they also have weaknesses to their team---also could have improvement on wording
-“I feel the season is going well. I don't judge success by only wins and losses, although that is important. Another big part of success is how the players and the team is developing and growing. In thinking back over the season so far all players have shown tremendous improvement and the team is coming together more as a "team" and the play is showing that.” -ROB-----I really like this quote and where you put it.
-With all this coming together the team is very successful.-----Could change "With all this coming together" because saying with all this is a very broad line, could mislead people and they could not know exactly what your talking about